[ Poetry ] Open Question : Love that never was...critiques?
I left her a love message which she'll never know.
It was a relationship that was meant to be.
I wonder if she hears the music when the wind blows.
Common time. Adagio? No. Andante will flow.
No repeats. As needed I will natural the G.
I left her a love message which she'll never know.
Back to G sharp for a brief moment of sorrow.
As I natural G it will sound splendid with B.
I wonder if she hears the music when the wind blows.
This time on every measure I will run eighth notes.
F sharp to E, to quarter notes ending in A.
I left her a love message which she'll never know.
Begin quarter note A at a slow crescendo.
Descend. Rest. Alternate A flat and natural G.
I wonder if she hears the music when the wind blows.
Now, the bass melody from quarter to eighth notes.
F sharp, A. D. quarter notes e. d. c. b. c.
I left her a love message which she'll never know.
I wonder if she hears the music when the wind blows.
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