[ Poetry ] Open Question : Love that never was...critiques?

I left her a love message which she'll never know. It was a relationship that was meant to be. I wonder if she hears the music when the wind blows. Common time. Adagio? No. Andante will flow. No repeats. As needed I will natural the G. I left her a love message which she'll never know. Back to G sharp for a brief moment of sorrow. As I natural G it will sound splendid with B. I wonder if she hears the music when the wind blows. This time on every measure I will run eighth notes. F sharp to E, to quarter notes ending in A. I left her a love message which she'll never know. Begin quarter note A at a slow crescendo. Descend. Rest. Alternate A flat and natural G. I wonder if she hears the music when the wind blows. Now, the bass melody from quarter to eighth notes. F sharp, A. D. quarter notes e. d. c. b. c. I left her a love message which she'll never know. I wonder if she hears the music when the wind blows.

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